So to develop my own erotic novel, I thought I’d continue to explore the theme of jealousy. I’m going to write a scene where Christophe Girder probes (??) Aurora Fox about her relationship with Miguel. To further echo clit-lit classic 50 Shades of Grey, I thought I’d also romanticise abusive relationships a bit and make wild assumptions about the BDSM lifestyle. (I admit that when I first heard of BDSM I thought it was a kind of reconstituted wood). I’m also going to pretend that feminism never happened. Here goes:
There was something very obviously on Christophe Girder’s intriguingly dominant labyrinthine European insanely-rich mind. He was silent, brooding, preoccupied. At first, Aurora Fox thought he might be constipated but a bit of light questioning clarified everything.
“Are you constipated, Christophe?” she asked, getting to the nub of the matter in the only way a faux-naif media studies student from Bramhall can.
“Ah,” he murmured, dismissively. “Eet ees…nuzzing. But,” he continued, conveniently helping the plot along, “I can’t ‘elp but wonder about the exact nature and history of your relationship weez zees Miguel guy but I am too much of a smouldering icon to come out and say straightaway zat I am ze jealous. I need ze – ‘ow you say? – ‘elp?”
“So you’re jealous?” whispered Aurora, making it absolutely clear to the reader what was going on. “You have no reason to be jealous of Miguel! I mean, OK, he’s gorgeous and he really fancies me and he tried to kiss me and we get on really well and everything but he’s…just…a friend.” She paused. “By that, I mean I don’t want him to shag me and/or smack me around.”
“I do not understand zees word ‘friend,'” breathed Christophe. He looked at her with such wounded, damaged longing it became instantly clear to her that he’d been emotionally and psychologically traumatised as a child, to the point where we expect the reader to understand and even empathise with the reasons behind him getting off on slapping women’s arses really quite painfully. In a special red room with a cupboard full of gynaecological implements. “My only friend in ze world abused my boy parts when I was adolescent child, so you can see how I’m fixed.” He shrugged, hopelessly.
“Oh, Christophe!” Aurora mouthed, silently. (There are only so many times you can use the word ‘whispered’ and retain credibility, you know). “I don’t care about Miguel! I don’t want him! I just want you, you freakin’ hot hunk of sexy billionaire real-estate! I promise to let you demean and humiliate me as much as you want…”
“Pah!” spat Christophe. “You are just saying zat.”
“No!” cried Aurora. “No, I’m not! You can do anything to me. Anything! Apart from one thing…”
Christophe’s breath hitched. “Not…?”
“Yes,” she said nodding gravely.
“Aurora,” he said, taking both her tiny girl hands in his enormous man ones. His grey eyes were aflame and also alight and a bit ablaze with a nameless but very profound grey-coloured emotion. “I promise that eef you sign my creepy contract I will never ever subject you to any music by The Lighthouse Family. Eef you fail to sign, however…well. I will subject you to ‘Lifted’ from dawn till dusk.”
Aurora was horrified. “You bastard.”
Suddenly Christophe hit her. He smacked her right buttock really, really hard. “You weel do vat I say, woman.”
“Oh! Hit me again!” she gasped, sexually. “It’s so hot!”
Christophe was more than happy to oblige. As he hit her again and again, she orgasmed repeatedly. Then he tied her up, took her up the jacksy then afterwards asked her to make him a risotto. Which she did.
“Wow,” murmured Christophe Girder. “That was fantastic.”
“Are you talking about the sex or the risotto?”
“The risotto, you needy bitch.”